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Good Thing

Sally saw a living thing in town. Wanting no frown, Also allowing for pain, This thing loathing gain, Sally slowly lost a plan. For a ditsy thing known as Stan, Now losing conviction, Stan playing with diction, Sally so tall, Took Stan’s call, Sally and Stan not to say, “I do”. Both go to zoo. Good thing too, Both stay a kangaroo.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/3/2010 9:35:00 AM
Cecil, your word were really "hoppin'" off the page at me. Nice write. Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:35:00 PM
congratulations on your win, Cecil!
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:43:00 AM
Cecil, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's challenging contest. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:07:00 AM
Bit confusing, but funny! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:38:00 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Have a wonderful holiday weekend my friend. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2010 7:49:00 AM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write and win without the letters m e and u .. as only Cecil can do.. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..at 4 a.m..
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:21:00 PM
Puzzle me, but makes me smile.
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