Good Samaritan Twist of Fate

You all came in from the cold shivering
all dressed in red which is bewildering
you'd stay and hover
cause some clutter
but at least you all stopped quivering

Again found you at my kitchen sink
I thought perhaps you all wanted a drink
so I ran the tap water
not thinking it was slaughter
oh ladybugs the way you died just stinks!


2-18-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Adams Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Real Ladies, (bugs or not) don't hang out in sinks! (That's what I always heard!!) JUSTIFIED!!!.............80)
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 6:46 PM
I liked Tom's reply to you below. Those ladybugs are supposed to be lucky but in this case, their luck ran out!! Good one.
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Yes, you could say they went on a water park sink ride lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Andrea; appreciate it!~Che :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 11:44 AM
I hope animal welfare don't read this lol. Tom
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Lol, me neither…I'll plead innocent! Thanks so much for very kind (witty) comment and visit Tom; appreciate it!~Che :)
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