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Good Samaritan Twist of Fate

You all came in from the cold shivering all dressed in red which is bewildering you'd stay and hover cause some clutter but at least you all stopped quivering Again found you at my kitchen sink I thought perhaps you all wanted a drink so I ran the tap water not thinking it was slaughter oh ladybugs the way you died just stinks! 2-18-18

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Pat Adams

Date: 2/22/2018 5:24:00 PM

Real Ladies, (bugs or not) don't hang out in sinks! (That's what I always heard!!) JUSTIFIED!!!.............80)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2018 6:46:00 PM

I liked Tom's reply to you below. Those ladybugs are supposed to be lucky but in this case, their luck ran out!! Good one.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/18/2018 9:49:00 PM

Yes, you could say they went on a water park sink ride lol! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Andrea; appreciate it!~Che :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/18/2018 11:44:00 AM

I hope animal welfare don't read this lol. Tom

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/18/2018 9:48:00 PM

Lol, me neither…I'll plead innocent! Thanks so much for very kind (witty) comment and visit Tom; appreciate it!~Che :)