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Good Ole Days?

Bright sunlight tumbles from the crystal blue, while contemplation plows my fertile mind. The moon comes early, making its debut. Dark night will settle, leaving day behind. These sights implore my consciousness to think, since days can see their joy sometimes abate. Such times like these can be a tasteless drink. As darkness falls, I tensely sit and wait. Such times have come and gone in rapid fire. My strained heart wants to know my life is good. I strive to see the joy through muck and mire, Remembering the fun of my boyhood. I’ve heard it all my life in diverse ways. Are these the times we’ll call the Good Ole Days?

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Date: 12/18/2023 3:41:00 PM
nice write.....'goodt oldt daze' of younger times were one thing.....but, good old days of older times can effect themselves most purposely within (us) everyday..... : ) stan sand
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 12/18/2023 5:49:00 PM
Hi Stan. Thank you very much for your kind, and observant comments. I appreciate your words. ZIM
Date: 11/29/2023 4:20:00 PM
Fortunately, we have lived in a great era, Z. I wouldn't trade in my good ole days for anything, nor would I trade in these good ole days either (lol). Sonnet well-done!
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Date: 11/23/2023 8:45:00 PM
Very well written sonnet, Robert. My boyhood days were my good ole days. I just didn't know it at the time.
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Robert Zimmerman
Date: 11/23/2023 9:06:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel for your positive comments and for your own personal reflections. I wonder how many people today think these will be the good ole days. My boyhood days look better all the time. Z

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