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- Good Night - Nursery Rhyme 3 -

A moonlit night
                            so beautiful and bright 
                            weaves you into soft twilight

                            A moonlit night
                            so beautiful and bright
                            look moon has night cap, a bit of a sight

                           A moonlit night
                           so beautiful and bright
                           rest on your pillow of lace white

                           A moonlit night
                           so beautiful and bright
                           twinkling and glimmering candlelight

                           A moonlit night
                           so beautiful and bright
                           as darkness closes, I kiss you good night





                          24/03/2021
                          Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                          Nursery Rhyme 3 Poetry Contest
                          Sponsored by: Eve Roper
                          3rd place in the contest
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Edmonds  Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:55 PM
That’s so good Anne-Lise, love the poem and picture. Congratulations on your well deserved win... Belle :-)
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:02 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:49 PM
I'm back with warmest congratulations on your fine winning entry, Anne-Lise. Kindest regards, Evelyn :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:02 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win sweet Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:01 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, a lovely nursery rhyme! The repetition of two lines makes it even more charming for the kids - they are going to love the refrain. Hugs ~ Mala
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:01 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 11:45 AM
This is a great nursery rhyme, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:56 AM
I just love this Anne-Lise! It is a perfect nursery rhyme especially with the repetition of the first two lines through out the poem. I can just hear little ones repeating your refrain. Your formatting really sets off the emphasis of the third line of each stanza! Gratulerer! I hope I said that correctly!
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:00 AM
- Completely written in Norwegian, Sam :) - Thank you very much for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Back to say..........Congratulations on your win. "So Cute" Have a blessed day..................
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 1:58 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brul Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:16 AM
Lovely nursery rhyme! Enjoyed like a kid..Congratulations Anne-Lise. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 1:57 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Hi Ann-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 1:57 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:34 PM
Sunshine, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 2:03 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 11:31 AM
This is so cute. I love it and the picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day............
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 11:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 4:39 AM
The repetitiveness is great, gives the poem momentum and charm. Wonderful Nursery Rhyme - best wishes in the contest sis. Blessings and hugs Anne Lise, Your poetry sis Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 11:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, sis Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Lovely, sweet melody Anne-Lise! The repetition enhances the effect. :) Linda
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:53 AM
- Linda, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Beautiful!!! A amazing rhyme... simply beautiful. A child will adore this. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:53 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 10:12 AM
The words of this beautiful rhyme are full of wonder and enchantment, Anne-Lise. The soothing repetition will lull a child into sweet dreams. Best wishes for the contest. hugs, Evelyn :D
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:53 AM
- Many thanks Evelyn, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Perfect! Love the pic too! Love it!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:52 AM
- Kim, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 6:13 AM
I think your moon meme is wonderful and I so enjoyed your nursery rhyme. Blessings and a big hug. Thanks for your visit and kind comment on my poem.
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:52 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 4:48 AM
A wonderful lullaby, Anne-lise:) should do well in the contest:)
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:52 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Wow, Anne Lise. That's a great lullaby as a nursery rhyme. Best for a win.
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 4:01 AM
- Victor, many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 12:40 AM
Lovely - so full of optimism and hope; nothing like stars and the moon to sooth a person! Almost a lullaby!
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:55 AM
- Softness for small ears ... who will soon sleep, and dream sweet dreams :) - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 5:05 PM
lovely one with smooth flow!
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:51 AM
- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Hon, I love this nursery rhyme and I think children would too! The repeating lines are perfect. Best wishes for a win in Eve's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:49 AM
- Thank you very much, Carolyn ... simple, but easy to remember for children ... thank you for good wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 12:08 PM
aww Anne-Lise this is so charming I would have loved this read to me when i was little:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:47 AM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Jan ... my daughter loved being read to ... we always read a little before bedtime ... and evening prayer ... feels like 100 years ago :))) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:19 AM
this is charming, anne-lise! good luck in the contest...
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:40 AM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Lovely nursery rhyme Anne, I wouldn't know where to start. Tom
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:39 AM
- My daughter loved rhyming poems when she was little ... I read to her every night ... but it is 100 years ago :))) - Thanks, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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