Kayod5 Kayode Poet Verse

Good Night

Be you,
On you alone
rely.

Rely,
Not on man's vow;
Your hands.

Your hands:
Only true friends,
Play not.

Play not,
In your morning;
Time flies.

Time flies,
Hit the targets;
Save wins.

Save wins,
Days are differed;
Your night.

Your night,
Guide jelously;
Fear God.

Fear God
And worship him -
Good night.

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Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 11:56 PM :) :)

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:04 PM Awesome win...PD Kayod5 Kayode January 11, 2015 at 10:46 PM Thank you so much...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 9, 2015 at 8:37 PM I love how you ended your train, Kayod, and I enjoyed the journey! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Kelly Deschler January 9, 2015 at 12:50 AM It was interesting to see where you decided to take the journey of your poem. Congrats on placing with this creative write, Kayode!

Earl Schumacker January 6, 2015 at 4:41 AM Hi KAYOD5, That was a very good night. Nice stream of consciousness and message. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 5:16 PM This is a good train ride Kayode; pity that technically it went slightly off the track, but on the whole I enjoyed it, especially the ending. Pity I missed it before! You still merit hearty congratulations! hugs // paul Kayod5 Kayode January 6, 2015 at 12:50 AM Yes Paul,my bird simply flew with a wing, thanks to the kindness from Richard; It is a learning process ...huggs

Jan Allison January 5, 2015 at 4:18 PM Dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx Kayod5 Kayode January 6, 2015 at 12:52 AM Thank you Jan for the message...huggs

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 3:57 PM Hello Kayode, I think this is a very good poem, unfortunately you are off a bit on the form. I still wanted to honor your creativity with a top 10 finish. Thanks for entering my contest. Kayod5 Kayode January 5, 2015 at 4:03 PM Thank you Richard, it is a learning process. I think with time and more efforts things will be better. Thanks for all the efforts and this honour done me....huggs

Richard Lamoureux December 8, 2014 at 8:23 AM Thanks for riding the train Kayode! Kayod5 Kayode December 8, 2014 at 4:52 PM One can not afford to be left out Richard,yours is invogue,immense thanks for the encouragement and leadership...huggs

Eileen Manassian December 7, 2014 at 9:17 AM It crescendos into a great ending. :) Lovely! Kayod5 Kayode December 7, 2014 at 10:06 AM Thanks Eileen,nice to hear from you...huggs

Donna Jones December 7, 2014 at 8:23 AM This is awesome....wonderful...:-) Kayod5 Kayode December 7, 2014 at 8:32 AM Donna my friend, happy to hear from you; thank you very much for the visit...huggs

Jan Allison December 7, 2014 at 7:41 AM great wise words Kayod5:-) hugs Jan xx Kayod5 Kayode December 7, 2014 at 8:30 AM Thank you Jan...huggs