Good Night

“It is pointless me using this,” he said
As he held it laying in bed
He tried it again 
Which made him feel great pain
So he slept with his night cap off of his head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Neels Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Soupmail returned :)
Neels Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 11:46 AM
witty Sid at his best lol , love Wilma
Cooper Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 6:43 PM
wow this is so good and now I am smiling lol thank you for your comment and I think you are better then me lol
Hendricks Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 6:23 PM
hahaha. Good one, you shameless person. Oops!! It seems I'm the one with the dirty mind here. Licia
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Nice humor and wit, Sydney. Thanks for your comments. Rest assure, you have not spoiled the beauty of my poem and have enhanced it.
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Enjoyed this one..LOL.Great idea to add a little spice to the dull times..Sara
Gordon Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:37 PM
er pillows...
Gordon Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:37 PM
lol cute....aw...that is cute...I pictured those little caps from the 1800's...they wore them due to lack of heat in the house..ug..have you ever seen one of the fillows of ancient days? it looked like a small stool..imagine..
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