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Good night

“It is pointless me using this,” he said As he held it laying in bed He tried it again Which made him feel great pain So he slept with his night cap off of his head

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2011 12:19:00 PM
Soupmail returned :)
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Date: 4/17/2011 11:46:00 AM
witty Sid at his best lol , love Wilma
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:43:00 PM
wow this is so good and now I am smiling lol thank you for your comment and I think you are better then me lol
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:23:00 PM
hahaha. Good one, you shameless person. Oops!! It seems I'm the one with the dirty mind here. Licia
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:39:00 PM
Nice humor and wit, Sydney. Thanks for your comments. Rest assure, you have not spoiled the beauty of my poem and have enhanced it.
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:37:00 PM
lol cute....aw...that is cute...I pictured those little caps from the 1800's...they wore them due to lack of heat in the house..ug..have you ever seen one of the fillows of ancient days? it looked like a small stool..imagine..
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:37:00 PM
er pillows...
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this one..LOL.Great idea to add a little spice to the dull times..Sara
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