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Good Morning

What is time? another spin around the dial Tick tock goes the clock Second to minute:A voice screaming ''Hey Doc'' Time to wake Time to make a new Feat to floor,seldom make it,except a few These random mornings my watch I do not wear I wake,smile and laugh''without the utmost care'' Slip up my double knot and dare the world... On cloud twelve,now feat can't touch the ground Nor would I let Smiling a smirk sweetly smiling Not one regret... To harness this morning would be Heaven in a bottle that I must leave behind If it is''as of now'' it has to be aged -potential to be a unique and special wine... I raise my glass to the next tasting.....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 1:45:00 PM

I hate mornings, but I enjoyed your poems. Justin, so we shall wine together and embrace another one. Good morning as you say it .... Linda

Jai Bankson
Date: 3/26/2016 3:32:00 PM

Sounds like a plan

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/21/2016 7:24:00 AM

Let me know when you post a new one. Do drop by when time permits.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/17/2016 11:17:00 PM

Excellent word play throughout, and so many memorable, clever lines. I quite like, "Slip up my double knot and dare the world..."..this is really unique...those last lines are golden brilliant. Keep up the great work. Always, Laura

Jai Bankson
Date: 3/21/2016 1:07:00 AM

I appreciate that,,that was my favorite line as well.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/17/2016 11:18:00 PM

I'm adding this gem to my favorites!~Laura

Skat A

Date: 3/17/2016 10:31:00 AM

I love morning, and good morning to you. SKAT

Jai Bankson
Date: 3/21/2016 1:10:00 AM

Heelllo-I am not a morning person at all but I had a great night and felt like a couple of trillion for day or two..Take care;Cole

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/16/2016 8:11:00 AM

I personally am a morning person. I can't wait to put my feet on the ground to start the day. I enjoyed your poem.

Jai Bankson
Date: 3/21/2016 1:16:00 AM

Thank you sir,I was just blessed for a couple of days,I'll TAKE IT-I reposted Glimpse-so thanks.lol and changed that second person narrative but it deserves more than a glance.My mind has taken a sudden break..Not a fan.Take care,hope to have something new soon......