Good Examples Made My Life-

Good Examples Made My Life…

WHEN I WAS A CHILD…
Father made a living providing a nice life.
Mother, was homemaker, caregiver, and wife.
Throughout the years, I watched those two.
Trying to find a pleasant life’s view.
I went to church when I was young.
My faith upon grown-up examples was hung.
When reality struck, it hit very hard,
For several years, my heart felt charred.

WHEN I WAS DISTROUGHT…
God sent two young men, clean cut, alert
Dressed in dark suits; wearing white shirts
Tap tap tapping on my front door.
They changed my for life evermore—
They brought me back into God’s groove.
But never knew it because I moved.
They said the words that sparked my heart.
Words once lost before a fresh start.

WHEN I NEEDED HELP…
There once was that man, long ago
That helped me even though I said, “No”
I was changing my own flat tire; avoiding ire.
Just like always, shunning manly desires.
Gently jumping I bounced on my stuck lug wrench.
So, like many times before moving inch by inch.
He spoke of his family and his love for his wife.
I let him help; as promised he gave me no strife.

LIFE WENT ON…
I reached in my heart, 
Opened up and let God take part.
I read His word; went back to church.
Sat each Sunday on pews of birch.
As I grew old, life’s thoughts reran.
My daughters were married, my son a man.
Now, I thank the Lord that is up above.
For the blessings of love He sent to me.

MANY YEARS PAST and I still remember …
God sent two young men, clean cut, alert
Dressed in dark suits; wearing white shirts
Tap tap tapping on my front door.


© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 16, 2010
Poetic form:  Rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/13/2010 8:18:00 PM
Nice poem, brings memories to me. I have invited those men in my home several times. They were polite each time and non forceful with their beliefs. We always had a good discussion on each others views of religions. They have given up a lot to do what they do and are very humble Smiles
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Date: 3/17/2010 11:38:00 AM
What a wonderful day it is today and it is a pleasure to have time to read some poetry today. I am happy that yours is amongst the ones I have read today Dane Ann. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. This is the first time in a few days that I could spend a little time here at the soup. It won't be long today but better then not at all you know. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2010 4:59:00 PM
interesting poem, glad you found a faith.
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