Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Good Clean Living

Eighty-three with luscious white hair
My old geezer friends all got shiny domes up there 
Feel sooo damn bad
Just kidding, I'm glad
My secret is clean living, thought that I would share

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 10, 2018 at 8:20 AM Giggles, my babe's had a shiny dome since age 19, one of his son's got his hair genes... seems it's head or chest one or the other ;) Good morning sweet Jack! xomo <3 Jack Ellison October 10, 2018 at 8:44 AM My head is coved with a luscious white crown... my chest is as smooth as a baby's bum!!! Lovesies, Happy Jackles XOXOX

Tom Cunningham October 10, 2018 at 7:51 AM I'm off to buy soap,that's where I went wrong lol. Jack Ellison October 10, 2018 at 8:41 AM Awwwwwwwwwwww! Kissy kissy!!! Tom Cunningham October 10, 2018 at 8:39 AM To the moon and back lol Jack Ellison October 10, 2018 at 8:04 AM No offense!!! LOL LOL Oops sorry my good friend... do you still lo e me?????