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Good Clean Dirt

the dirt clung to them creased by life’s endless struggles broken fingernails a scarred litany of bruised, gnarled and calloused hands the poor man’s mantra ©6/2/2023

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Date: 6/12/2023 3:44:00 PM
Top notch Haiku's that catch the toil of poor folks' labor. Powerful indeed! Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 6/12/2023 11:02:00 AM
I felt bowled over by this one John. Powerful and expressive - congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support the contest
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Date: 6/12/2023 10:03:00 AM
John, you know my thoughts about everything you write. Sharing this win with you is a great pleasure.
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Date: 6/12/2023 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Love this piece of art. Favorite.
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Date: 6/3/2023 5:00:00 AM
I really like this John….says it all! Hardworking hands! Debx
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