Good Clean Dirt

the dirt clung to them
creased by life’s endless struggles
broken fingernails


a scarred litany
of bruised, gnarled and calloused hands
the poor man’s mantra


©6/2/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:44 PM
Top notch Haiku's that catch the toil of poor folks' labor. Powerful indeed! Congratulations! Brian
Lane Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 10:03 AM
John, you know my thoughts about everything you write. Sharing this win with you is a great pleasure.
Anaya Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win! Love this piece of art. Favorite.
M  Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 5:00 AM
I really like this John….says it all! Hardworking hands! Debx
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