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Good Bye

dark clothes black eyes no one knows why she cries no one knows of her pain deep down no one knows what brings about her frown you know this chick very close indeed for this chick you love and her heart you need this one night you couldnt help her see she wouldnt take your hand when you reached out and said "come to me." you found her lying on her back make awful from her tears never knew her pain was so great and that she'd struggled for so many fears. but as you gently embraced her cold,dead, limp body your hand gently brushes agianst her face her sadness and pain you can still see your eyes search for the "suicide note" found it and through the tears read what she wrote "I love you babe and i promised you i'd try but i just cant, i love you ....... .....and goodbye."

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Date: 4/29/2011 6:02:00 AM
dark....moving....unique. I really like it keep the poems comming.... come check out my poems always lookin for criticism ~Shion Ravenwolf
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Date: 7/18/2010 12:13:00 AM
Nice poem. Sad and really full of emotion. As I know suicide is a really close to home prospect for many teenagers like me. Love dark angel.
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