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Good Bad Advice

// // // // *. , *. // . *. * // *. * * .//. *. bitter but so nice large gin & tonic with ice lemon and lime slice sit back feet up stirring thrice christmas needs a little vice | | | | | | ____ ) ( ____ (-—-——————) Happy Christmas everyone! By David Kavanagh monorhyme tanka 5/7/5/7/7

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/30/2022 12:26:00 PM

Your "good bad advice" is a cute write/picture. Hope you had a Blessed Christmas. Have a Blessed Happy New Year 2023.........

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/30/2022 1:41:00 PM

Well I had a few of these things over the Christmas Paula, in moderation of course, thank you for stopping by today, and I wish you a (pain free) new year, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2022 10:14:00 AM

I've never been part of this life style, but it sounds fun.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/27/2022 11:55:00 AM

It’s probably not for everyone Andrea, G&T that is, but I’m sure we all have our little guilty pleasures at Christmas time, cheers David

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/26/2022 9:12:00 AM

What a delightful poem ~ thank you for the share. Happy holidays to you and your loved ones ~

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/26/2022 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Line, have this virtual one on me, cheers David

Charles Messina

Date: 12/25/2022 3:20:00 AM

I'll need a gin & tonic after today with all my children and grandchildren coming over (lol) Very nicely done, David. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and Happy & Healthy New Year! Thanks also for commenting on my POTD! All the very best, Charlie Cheers!

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/25/2022 4:19:00 AM

Your too kind Charlie, yep find yourself a nice comfy armchair, let the kids go mad, and enjoy a wonderful strong G&T, happy Christmas to you and yours, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/24/2022 11:38:00 AM

Quinine and vitamin C, good things. Love the keyboard-art and poem! Merry Christmas

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/24/2022 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Anaya, you can have a virtual drink, and read this one all at once, cheers and Merry Christmas David

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/22/2022 6:59:00 AM

Yum. Love this! And CHEERS! I actually hated gin and tonic till I found myself on a beach in the Caribbean at Christmas with nothing else to drink, I absolutely developed a taste for it! Happy Solstice! xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2022 7:24:00 AM

Heya Super Mo, Ah the secret of G&T is acquiring a taste for it, Gunpowder Gin is very popular over here now, very strong but has a nice kick to it, just like the name suggests, joyeux Solstice, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/22/2022 5:35:00 AM

It sure does David, love the creative layout. Merry Christmas. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/22/2022 6:43:00 AM

After being a saint all year it’s time for a little decadence lol, cheers David