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My own maze of a mind is dangerous a moment of fresh air, and on the edge and suddenly I question death For who am I to think that I can defy the normality of life? In a strange path I walk, but where are those who follow? Is it only like a fool I spin this endless web of spontaneous desire? That perhaps my loneliness in other words is just a fragment of my denial, for personal safety and self-respect. For others dare not walk on flaming coals in fear they'll burn their feet Yet... does it make me a legend? One that does not get remembered but somehow nature can maintain, and by which outcasted spawn can be regressed - Not even necessarily through my own conception. Irrational? maybe... yes Like the greyish bleak clouds that cover up an illuminating moon, Inconspicuous, self righteous or lost without a clue? To whom do I owe this frailty blame? If I am, in fact, the ONLY one... then why, and will it ever change?

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Date: 5/20/2024 9:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/12/2016 11:40:00 PM
ALICIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:38:00 PM
ALICIA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:28:00 AM
Alicia,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:44:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Alicia - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:58:00 AM
So much to ponder, well said. Welcome to poetrysoup Alicia, i am looking forward to reading more of your poetry :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:47:00 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup, like your write and keep writing. Richard
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