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Good-Bad Or Indifferent

Expressions of an emptiness clinging to a limb; Lovers going places few have ever been. Relationships reflected on, severed or now gone; But the drummer never stops his beat and life it must go on. Listening to the quite sounds of a secret lesson sent; Insisting to remember times that some say came and went. Floating in the air one breaths lie words that marked the day; And I will always keep them fresh till I’m gone away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/7/2011 5:32:00 PM
Happy Friday, Leonard! Good Bad or indifferent" if persued might open a realm of possibilities. Still, in a subtle way you have touched each one. Perhaps closure arrives with resigned acceptance.? Great metaphoric reference with the usage of "the drummer....". Keep well and stay happy!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:58:00 AM
great to see you still here. i love you. john
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