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Gone With the Wind

"gone with the wind"

gone with the wind 
are loving hands
that touched my heart

washed by high tides
are shining eyes
that sparkled bright

silent of sound
are your whispers
embraced with song

now suddenly 
gone with the wind
your love has left

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08-17-23

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/18/2024 2:07:00 AM

A lovely and touching poem, Lisa. It is so sad when love departs, leaving us bereft of those special feelings and emotions. Luckily, that does not have to be the end...a new love could be waiting backstage. ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

Lisa Ricci
Date: 1/20/2024 5:42:00 AM

Hello Paul. Good Morning. Thank you as always for sharing your intake and commentary. Truly. I do not take that for granted. And yes, I agree with your commentary of a new love could be waiting. That is a nice thought... May this day find you well. Happy New Year. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/3/2023 8:15:00 PM

Lisa, this s lyrical and touching. The theme of lost love revervebratesin humanity. I was moaning to a friend long, long ago about aloxt love, She said this to me.. you don’t have to go looking for love, when it’s where you come from. I was use t with her, but she was right. There is so much love needed in the world.not only man-woman, but also of family, pets, friends.. livers come and go, I think.. best to find a new one. Pangit. A fine write

Lisa Ricci
Date: 1/20/2024 5:39:00 AM

Good Morning Pangie. Hi. I am so beyond sorry for being late with responding. Truly. Never do I take you for granted or your wonderful intakes on any entry or your visits or commentary. Thank you ever so much. May this day find you well. Happy New Year. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)