Gone Too Far

dull, drear imagination reared layers added to a wrinkled fear what is tomorrow if life has passed laid down pencils lead, is it such disgrace the mind is meant to wander there's time now to erase with ease the willow bellows bending hate within her peace seagulls nip upon the garden it's all life has left to give gone too far has earth stopped listening learning/turning the leaves have fallen I read about it's demise that's not dewdrops dripping from her eyes
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Date: 5/5/2020 11:00:00 AM
Really well written enjoyed immensely, especially the last phrase, loved it T!
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Date: 4/30/2020 12:36:00 AM
Fascinating lines.. This is awesome, so awesome.
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Date: 4/27/2020 4:38:00 PM
Deep and beautiful in its sadness.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 4/27/2020 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 4/26/2020 9:40:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 4/27/2020 5:13:00 PM
Thanks Arthur
Date: 4/26/2020 1:32:00 PM
Life is what you make it. Things are thrown our way to experience Life, to become stronger. There is great turmoil in our world at present, perhaps there is the need for a Great Awakening and unifying of the human soul/spirit. All will come good.
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:33:00 PM
I hope it will xxx
Date: 4/26/2020 10:32:00 AM
I love all of your poem, but the first stanza is just lovely. The imagery you've created is just stunning. I too am afraid what tomorrow will bring. Thank you for buying my boook, the cover is my own oil painting that I've posted here on Tea Part.... :) you made my day. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Eve a pleasure to be able to read
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/26/2020 1:30:00 PM
Love to see that book. Where do I go to purchase?
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