Gone Too Far

dull, drear imagination reared layers added to a wrinkled fear what is tomorrow if life has passed laid down pencils lead, is it such disgrace the mind is meant to wander there's time now to erase with ease the willow bellows bending hate within her peace seagulls nip upon the garden it's all life has left to give gone too far has earth stopped listening learning/turning the leaves have fallen I read about it's demise that's not dewdrops dripping from her eyes
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Hamilton Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 11:00 AM
Really well written enjoyed immensely, especially the last phrase, loved it T!
Makama Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 12:36 AM
Fascinating lines.. This is awesome, so awesome.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 4:38 PM
Deep and beautiful in its sadness.
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April 27, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Thank you Andrea
Vaso Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:40 PM
Beautiful!
Poetry Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Thanks Arthur
Labyrinth Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Life is what you make it. Things are thrown our way to experience Life, to become stronger. There is great turmoil in our world at present, perhaps there is the need for a Great Awakening and unifying of the human soul/spirit. All will come good.
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April 26, 2020 at 1:33 PM
I hope it will xxx
Roper Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 10:32 AM
I love all of your poem, but the first stanza is just lovely. The imagery you've created is just stunning. I too am afraid what tomorrow will bring. Thank you for buying my boook, the cover is my own oil painting that I've posted here on Tea Part.... :) you made my day. Hugs Eve
Poetry Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Thanks Eve a pleasure to be able to read
Labyrinth Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Love to see that book. Where do I go to purchase?
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