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Gone To Ground

Lightning flashing danger unrelenting fools become unlucky conductors gone to ground

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Miranda Renee Almy

Date: 2/3/2010 3:03:00 PM

Hello Mac and thanks for your warm comments . I am very new to writing indeed. This particular poem caught my attention and the lines "unrelenting fools become unlucky conductors..... to me makes a lot of sense happy writing

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2010 3:32:00 PM

Have met a couple people that were struck by lightning and lived. Some are not so lucky. Interesting topic that you have presented here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by my poem "Forsythia Blooms" and commenting. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 2/2/2010 11:00:00 AM

Sometimes it is as obvious as a flash of lightning, the danger we face in life Mac, but many do not heed the warning. I have enjoyed reading you today, my Man! Sincerely, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/2/2010 8:35:00 AM

Oh yes, dangerous out there. Thank you Mac for your contest and your comments to my entry.. Some of these contests have come and gone before I found them. Keeps us on our toes. Love, Joyce