Gone To Ground

Lightning
flashing danger
unrelenting fools
become unlucky conductors
gone to ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Almy Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 3:03 PM
Hello Mac and thanks for your warm comments . I am very new to writing indeed. This particular poem caught my attention and the lines "unrelenting fools become unlucky conductors..... to me makes a lot of sense happy writing
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Have met a couple people that were struck by lightning and lived. Some are not so lucky. Interesting topic that you have presented here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by my poem "Forsythia Blooms" and commenting. Sara
Freeman Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Sometimes it is as obvious as a flash of lightning, the danger we face in life Mac, but many do not heed the warning. I have enjoyed reading you today, my Man! Sincerely, Moses
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Oh yes, dangerous out there. Thank you Mac for your contest and your comments to my entry.. Some of these contests have come and gone before I found them. Keeps us on our toes. Love, Joyce
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