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Gone Fishing Montauk

It's the weekend and time to decompress Hopped on the boat and out to sea I went Gone fishing out of Montauk New York In the Atlantic Ocean With just perfect wind and right tide And beautiful sunshine A fabulous feeling spread thru me I knew it was gonna be a great day at sea Her lady boat is flying like a race horse Taking me away from land Leaving all my worries and stress behind Only looking forward to catch that one big fish No disappointment there I arrived at the right home of big fish Smile Akkina R Downing 7-17-17

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Mike Reed

Date: 8/2/2017 11:31:00 AM

Your Best, I believe....blending and mixing. Nice Work! Mike Reed

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/2/2017 6:54:00 PM

Awe, thank you so much Mike, sweet comment :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2017 9:25:00 AM

You sent me on that sea and fish quest with you my friend. My, my how it reminded me how much I miss fishing. Loved this positive and uplifting poem.. A fav..

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/1/2017 12:13:00 PM

I do love the ocean, I go out there whenever I'm can. I hope you can try to go at least Inez this summer :) I'm grateful always for your time and comment and that Fave :) have a blessed day my dear friend. Hugs :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2017 4:27:00 PM

Akkina, as the summer heat waves through, to entice a soul to go out and fish or swim ;) nice verse.. hugs ~*

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/19/2017 4:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, I appreciate your stopping by and left me sweet comment... Hugs :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/19/2017 4:03:00 PM

Cool leeward pondering this sea sonnet evokes, Akkina. Spread your net wide, did you now. This is one nice catch your muse lured w/your pen. Lovely write. Love and smiles.

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/19/2017 4:48:00 PM

I sure did my friend. It was a fabulous day for me :) thanks so much. Love and smile :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2017 2:44:00 PM

akkina, this is so refreshing.. enjoyed your sonnet to bits.. huggs

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/19/2017 2:54:00 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed :) thanks so much dear... hugs :)

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2017 6:18:00 AM

Lovely idea for a poem.. Nice catch.

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/19/2017 8:02:00 AM

Thanks so much SO.... hugs, Kina :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/19/2017 5:30:00 AM

What a marvelous day for you my dear, Akkina! What a terrible one for the fish! Haha! I enjoyed the sailing my friend. Wish you to have many more such days with more fish bringing home!

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/19/2017 8:00:00 AM

Haha... I love sailing, one of the most relaxing peaceful feeling. It's like flying without wings away from negativity and all that's happening on land :) thank you so much Demetrios, always happy to hear from you :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 7/18/2017 7:26:00 PM

Sounds like a perfect summer day Akkina! I've only been to Montauk Point a handful of times but it is a beautiful beach to behold! Your charming poem makes me want to go either to the beach or fishing; thanks for sharing!~Che :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 8:24:00 PM

Thank you so much Che, yes I love it out there. I'm just about there most of the weekend. Well I try to anyways :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2017 3:11:00 PM

- I understand you love to fish ... a lovely day ... perfect to enjoy, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 3:26:00 PM

That I do :) thank you so much my friend Miss Anne-Lise...hugs :) Kina

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/18/2017 9:46:00 AM

That sounds like an amazingly fun day I could use a day or two like that. Very nice break Kina thank you for sharing.

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 10:25:00 AM

Oh yes it was, I had so much fun. Montauk is one of the best place to visit and go fishing. So keep that in mind, you can take your wife and family, a very friendly place and nice beaches too. Campground is right on the beach :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/18/2017 8:40:00 AM

Happy fishing my friend...great verse...^WW^

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 10:16:00 AM

Thanks ^WW^ always appreciating your visit and comment :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/17/2017 11:01:00 PM

Wow! what a lovely day to spend your weekend, with the wind in your hair and your boat cutting through the ocean like a race horse with their white manes flying. The sea does have such a calming effect and then the excitement of the prize - catching a big fish...Maria :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/18/2017 7:50:00 AM

I love it out there, a therapeutic place for me :) thanks Maria, always loving your visit and comment... hugs-- Kina