Gone Fishin’

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He loved to cast a line and lay
  crab pots off the rocks down the bay. 
I would tag along for the ride
       and hope Tangaroa bless the tide 
givin’ up its catch of the day 

So the fish whisperer did call
          on the sea god for a good haul.
But would say at fishin’ I suck
  and complain I brought him bad luck            
cos we always caught sweet f-all                          

He said to me “Skeet, have no fear
       and I’ll catch one for you I swear”.
Out of his tackle box he took
       his line and his bait and his hook
but what I needed was a beer

We cast our lines over the side
          and waited there for a wild ride.
Bites were few yet fewer than some 
      but our whisperin’ catch had come
with the wind and gone with the tide

Turnin’ he snarled at me and said
 “catchin’ fish ain’t the point, dickhead”.
Well bugger me! I thought it was
       and cracked another cold one cos
we showed up but the fish had fled

He’d feel the spindrift on his face
      and away it would his blues chase.
Pulled by the tides of time and sea
                 it was all just a lark to me
but for him was a sacred place

There’d be no fish or crab or cray
            or tales of ones that got away.
Instead in our fishermen’s curse
       we’d contemplate the megaverse
by the sandstone cliffs of Browns Bay
                                            
He had fished up and down this coast
  but this old haunt he fished the most.
At ebb and flow without a care
    I could see what pull drew him here
but in his haunt now haunts his ghost

          
            Written: May 2025


      Dedicated to Craig Bowden
                1960 ~ 2021


 Photo above is the northern point at 
 Browns Bay on the northern beaches 
 of East Coast Bays in New Zealand.
 Tangaroa is the Maori god of the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/14/2025 12:54:00 PM
It seems to be that catching a fish isn't the purpose of fishing, unless he catches a big one. Then the measuring tape comes out. Lol. I'm sorry he is gone. There is still a fish with his name on its somewhere out there. This is a very informative story.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 5/14/2025 5:07:00 PM
It didn’t bother him if he didn’t catch anything but it bothered me. I’d rather be out on the golf course throwing my clubs instead of a line lol. Cheers Hilda.
Date: 5/13/2025 1:53:00 PM
Good people are just what we need. You got a good one.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 5/13/2025 2:51:00 PM
Yeah, you never really appreciate what you have until it’s gone. My mate would be tickled by this. Cheers Arlo.
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