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Gone Away

We were lying in the sand, With our hands locked You were looking at me as I was staring at the sun Why can I see it? You untangle your hand from mine Then the sun disappears I turn to look at you, but you are gone too What did i ever do wrong? Is it me or is it you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/2/2018 3:42:00 PM
Hi Julie.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you. Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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Date: 6/25/2018 9:52:00 PM
Ummm.. it's him!!
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