Gone Away
We were lying in the sand,
With our hands locked
You were looking at me as I was staring at the sun
Why can I see it?
You untangle your hand from mine
Then the sun disappears
I turn to look at you,
but you are gone too
What did i ever do wrong?
Is it me or is it you?
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