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May 25th, 2001. Crystalline rocks, Kept on dresser. Fluid in a tiny wok, Removes all the stressors. May 27th, 2001. On windows they knock, On display, prone on plush carpet. Body pulses with shock, With white chalk, On the floor, They mark it. He pushed the needle deeper, He cut his strings. In the end... Everyone else screamed. 04/08/13

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Date: 7/20/2013 7:15:00 PM
I agree with Craig's comment. This is very powerful. A well deserved win indeed. I will have to read your other poem on the subject. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:52:00 AM
Congrats on your absolute win... I will love to know the background of this piece... please do me that favour~A.O
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Jacob Bellville
Date: 4/20/2013 11:19:00 AM
I just wrote another poem about it. It's called: Guilt Gone Prologue. Thanks for the comment.
Date: 4/18/2013 7:33:00 PM
Jacob, Congratulations in Craig's "Empty Tissue Box " contest;-) always~ PD
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations..
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Date: 4/17/2013 6:15:00 PM
Ohh how sad but a story that must be told. Addiction in its purist form. J.
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