Gone

Animals all gone.
Hope has left this place as well.
Not a thing stirring.

It's nothing. Nada.
Not a light in city.
There is no city.

What is the cause of
this this terrible disaster?
One. Stupid. Mistake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Collins Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 7:41 AM
terrifying what can happen in a second or two.
Sanderson Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 12:49 AM
Great gesture in your pen her Jacob
Widjanarko Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Hello Jacob, where have you been? I am looking forward for your next poetry :D
Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Jacob. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Good story telling!
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Congrats to you, Jacob. I had seen this one before and am thinking it's a type of nuclear disaster or something.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Big congratulations on your win Jaccob, hugs xx
A   Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Jacob, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd
Neels Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 6:59 AM
A unique write especially your ending :) enjoyed it Jacob! tc Wilma
Wesley Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 12:28 PM
A dooms day poem with such an empty feeling. Are we waiting now for one?
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 6:02 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jacob. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 2:46 AM
Nicely done here Jacob!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 5:49 AM
Very well written Jacob....like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:37 AM
This is a fascinating write, Jacob. WAs it for the contest on the end of the world?
Gorelick Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 11:26 PM
Wow...love this...I like what you did with the last line..BG
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace