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Gone!

Gone away never coming back Lost forever won't be anymore Holding on just let go Stay here never letting go What happened Lost in the wind Going away done and over Happy times set in stone- not so much Faith, love, and dreams are gone away no use in holding on to what is already lost!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/23/2010 11:35:00 AM
ooooooo, i likey i likey, this is a great one very very effective last line. when i read this poem i think about all that i've been through and all that i've lost and then i get to the last line and i think well you are very very right, what can i do but shrug it off it's not the end of the world. great write brittany and it is very relatable! jo
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Date: 1/28/2010 11:40:00 AM
It is actually a fact. I agree with you. What is lost can't be regain. So it is no use striving, wasting time
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:44:00 AM
this poem is amazing i just felt so much from this poem keeo it up
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Date: 1/25/2010 10:53:00 AM
That closing line ses it all. Great power in this write Brittany. just has a certin flow to it but that closing line got me a perfect write
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:57:00 AM
Just stopping by to say good morning and hope you have a good day.
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:07:00 PM
Just stopping by to say hi and hope all is well.
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:36:00 PM
I wanted to thank individualey to each person I have ever come in contact with.
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Date: 1/23/2010 4:07:00 PM
thank you for everything.
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:09:00 AM
Sombering. It flows really nicely. Very passionate. You really do exhale in your poems. Beautiful, Matt <3
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Date: 1/22/2010 10:35:00 AM
Great Poem :)
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Date: 1/22/2010 9:33:00 AM
wow, i really love this <3
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:46:00 AM
Good poem Brit. little sad but a good write and heartfelt...regards...rob
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:32:00 AM
You're right; this is sad... Keep it up though. I like reading these.
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