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Gondola

Gliding on moonlit waves
Gold filters through row boat,
Gondola twirls…it’s song
Gently romancing hours .
Guitar plays lovers’ dream,
Gay the breaths of passion
Glossing canoe’s night sail !


Pleiades G : Kim Merryman
12`01`2016
checked at www.howmanysyllables .com
and Webster's dictionary

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Janice Canerdy December 7, 2016 at 4:44 PM Ahhh! Lovely, Nette--a 7! Janice

Paul Callus December 3, 2016 at 3:24 AM Wow! There is poetic beauty and romance in this gondola poem, Nette! I've never been on a gondola at nighttime, but I definitely must experience one! Hugs // paul

Daniel Turner December 2, 2016 at 8:18 PM Got room for me? Very romantic, nette:)

Doug Vinson December 1, 2016 at 4:45 PM "Gondola twirls…it’s song//Gently romancing hours ." Sigh.... : )

Frederic Parker December 1, 2016 at 12:26 PM living a dream my friend

Demetrios Trifiatis December 1, 2016 at 7:57 AM Beautiful romantic Pleiades dear, nette, good luck in the contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 3:45 AM - What lovely Pleiades poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel November 30, 2016 at 10:37 PM Now, this sounds like the winner, Nette:) lovely write:) a 7:)

Ilene Bauer November 30, 2016 at 4:17 PM lovely, nette! good luck in the contest...

Norma Arana November 30, 2016 at 3:45 PM I could not help but be taken through a poetic journey of life's moments so dreamy and exquisite!

Jan Allison November 30, 2016 at 3:19 PM breathtakingly beautiful Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green November 30, 2016 at 3:14 PM I am really enjoying these Pleiades G poems I have been reading today and especially yours Nette, this is so romantic feeling

Heidi Sands November 30, 2016 at 2:39 PM Beautiful Nette. Well done! :)