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Gliding on moonlit waves Gold filters through row boat, Gondola twirls…it’s song Gently romancing hours . Guitar plays lovers’ dream, Gay the breaths of passion Glossing canoe’s night sail ! Pleiades G : Kim Merryman 12`01`2016 checked at www.howmanysyllables .com and Webster's dictionary

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Date: 12/7/2016 4:44:00 PM
Ahhh! Lovely, Nette--a 7! Janice
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Date: 12/3/2016 3:24:00 AM
Wow! There is poetic beauty and romance in this gondola poem, Nette! I've never been on a gondola at nighttime, but I definitely must experience one! Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:18:00 PM
Got room for me? Very romantic, nette:)
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Date: 12/1/2016 4:45:00 PM
"Gondola twirls…it’s song//Gently romancing hours ." Sigh.... : )
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Date: 12/1/2016 12:26:00 PM
living a dream my friend
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Date: 12/1/2016 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful romantic Pleiades dear, nette, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 12/1/2016 3:45:00 AM
- What lovely Pleiades poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2016 10:37:00 PM
Now, this sounds like the winner, Nette:) lovely write:) a 7:)
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Date: 11/30/2016 4:17:00 PM
lovely, nette! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 11/30/2016 3:45:00 PM
I could not help but be taken through a poetic journey of life's moments so dreamy and exquisite!
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Date: 11/30/2016 3:19:00 PM
breathtakingly beautiful Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2016 3:14:00 PM
I am really enjoying these Pleiades G poems I have been reading today and especially yours Nette, this is so romantic feeling
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Date: 11/30/2016 2:39:00 PM
Beautiful Nette. Well done! :)
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