Golem and Angel

He was in love, deep, romantic love.
She was standoffish, aloof, above,
no need for pointless ideas thereof.
It was forbidden, like fox and dove.

His clay a gritty earthy mixture. 
Hers a sweet creamy marble picture
of comfort, a permanent fixture.
His secret love a proscribed stricture.

So he sat at her feet each long day
writing the love words he could not say.
He greatly feared from her side to stray
lest someone come and take her away.

He searched for the same magic by night
that brought him to life and gave him sight.
Hoping that her stone wings would take flight
and sweep them from this piteous plight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Sands Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 9:17 AM
I enjoyed your creative poem. Well done :)
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Many thanks Heidi! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Some men find it difficult to express love, but this has a happy ending. Well done.
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:10 AM
Hello friend Victor. I'm glad you read my love poem today. :)
Rose  Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:43 AM
A very unique and creative write my friend, much enjoyed :)
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Hello sweet Vie. Thank you for the visit and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Well done! It was forbidden, like fox and dove…
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Hey Kim. Thanks for the read and comment. I kinda liked that fox and dove line myself :)
Poet Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 8:01 PM
While it's unpleasant to see ourselves and the decisions we've made mirrored in such a fascinating work, Linda. It was a joy to do so, especially with the happy ending. An overall review of your trip reveals many hopes and dreams lost along the way. Well done I really enjoyed reading your work.
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:03 AM
Hello Lasaad. I am pleased you found this piece fascinating. Many thanks for reading and commenting. :)
Tor Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Reads like a fairytale you cleverly created, which you did and it was a joy to read. Love your version of characters played out. It had a happy ending. Reminds me of a girl that I had a crush on. I felt like the young man who was courting her. Well done Linda pleasure to read...
Fowler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Hello Michael. Thank you for the compliment on my poem. I hope the crush was a pleasant memory for you :) Thank you, always, for the positivity and encouragement.
Gregory Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 1:36 PM
An epithet of our journey which has euphemisticly reveal many hopes and dashed dreams. It's lovely to glimpse a bit of our life and choices done in this beautiful piece because though it's poignant its tantalizing. Nicely done
Fowler Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Many thanks for your comments today Weston. :) Yes, hopes and dreams, may the two coincide for you! I appreciate your visit :) Alice
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