golden sunrise

the morning sunrise
for a brief moment in time
gold drives out the blue

the evening sunset
for a brief moment in time
gold staves off the black
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Alhemaidy Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 11:06 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem, have a nice day ~ AA
Miller Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Thank you so much
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 11:57 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely sunrise and sunset, Terry :) - hugs
Miller Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 11:13 AM
That was pretty cool how you had each one doing something different with its gold. Congratulations
Miller Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Andrea
Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful/pretty "golden sunrise" Haiku writes again. This week our sky was filled with pink/lavender. Have a blessed day with your win................
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Paula
Kitchin Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 8:10 AM
Terry, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Tania for your kind comments, placement and for running this creative contest
Godwin Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 6:56 PM
The optimistic morn gives way to the sad-laced melancholy of evening hours. I don't think I've ever felt a haiku more. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Miller Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:53 AM
Oh my, thank you CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 5:29 PM
how delightful...these poems intertwined in with their beautiful imagery. Awesome Haikus! wishing you a pleasant evening
Miller Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 3:24 AM
Thank you so much
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Your pretty "golden sunrise" Haiku writes, paint a pretty picture. I love both Sunrise and Sunset pretty times of the day. "Good Luck" I did pink. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
Miller Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Thank you Paula
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