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golden sunrise

the morning sunrise
for a brief moment in time
gold drives out the blue

the evening sunset
for a brief moment in time
gold staves off the black

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Date: 8/19/2025 6:56:00 PM
The optimistic morn gives way to the sad-laced melancholy of evening hours. I don't think I've ever felt a haiku more. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/18/2025 5:29:00 PM
how delightful...these poems intertwined in with their beautiful imagery. Awesome Haikus! wishing you a pleasant evening
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/19/2025 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 8/18/2025 2:50:00 PM
Your pretty "golden sunrise" Haiku writes, paint a pretty picture. I love both Sunrise and Sunset pretty times of the day. "Good Luck" I did pink. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away............
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/19/2025 3:25:00 AM
Thank you Paula

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