Golden Soiree'

Crisp leaves gaily dance
As red and gold parchment gowns
Swirl on Autumn winds






Inspired by Abe Lopez' contest, Haiku Seasons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Great visual imagery! Autumn winds will get here again! Thanks for your comments Yours Matthew Anih
Anish Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 10:09 PM
Nice picture of fall - which will get here as it always does. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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May 25, 2009 at 8:02 PM
I love your Autumn parchment gowns. Beautiful Haiku. Thank you for you comment on my "The Last Dance". Love, Iolanda
Strand Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Nice work Donna.Rgds Brian
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May 4, 2009 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane
Augustus Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Congratulation on your honorable mention in the Haiku Seasons contest.
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May 1, 2009 at 12:14 PM
Nice autumn view in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
Curcio Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 10:04 AM
Beautiful - I love Autumn - and Spring - and Summer - but not Winter :-D
Gorelick Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 6:57 AM
I love the way you used your words in the lovely piece. Congrats on you success in the contest. BG
Richards Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations, Donna, on placing with this lovely poem in Abe's contest ! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:15 AM
Congrats on your success in Abe's contest Donna.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:04 AM
Nice work, congrats with your HM...Raul
Townsend Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:35 PM
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention in the contest. Very nice write. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
Mckenzie Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 7:07 PM
Wonderfully expressed great Haiku! Laura :)
Rider Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 3:10 PM
Wonderful Hiaku Donna!! & thank you for your comments on my poem also! I'm always honored. ~Trudy~
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April 30, 2009 at 2:05 PM
What an awesome tribute to autumn, Golden Girl! "Red and gold parchment gowns" is a rich, creative description of the leaves boasting fall colors. Love, Carolyn
Moreno Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Beautiful work Donna, best of luck in the contest...Raul
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