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Golden Soiree'

Crisp leaves gaily dance As red and gold parchment gowns Swirl on Autumn winds Inspired by Abe Lopez' contest, Haiku Seasons

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Matthew Anish

Date: 6/17/2009 4:35:00 PM

Great visual imagery! Autumn winds will get here again! Thanks for your comments Yours Matthew Anih

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/30/2009 10:09:00 PM

Nice picture of fall - which will get here as it always does. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/25/2009 8:02:00 PM

I love your Autumn parchment gowns. Beautiful Haiku. Thank you for you comment on my "The Last Dance". Love, Iolanda

Brian Strand

Date: 5/7/2009 12:35:00 AM

Nice work Donna.Rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 7:14:00 PM

Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane

Brandee Augustus

Date: 5/1/2009 1:47:00 PM

Congratulation on your honorable mention in the Haiku Seasons contest.

Date: 5/1/2009 12:14:00 PM

Nice autumn view in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/1/2009 10:04:00 AM

Beautiful - I love Autumn - and Spring - and Summer - but not Winter :-D

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/1/2009 6:57:00 AM

I love the way you used your words in the lovely piece. Congrats on you success in the contest. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/1/2009 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Donna, on placing with this lovely poem in Abe's contest ! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 5/1/2009 12:15:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Abe's contest Donna.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/1/2009 12:04:00 AM

Nice work, congrats with your HM...Raul

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/30/2009 11:35:00 PM

Congratulations on the Honorable Mention in the contest. Very nice write. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/30/2009 7:07:00 PM

Wonderfully expressed great Haiku! Laura :)

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/30/2009 3:10:00 PM

Wonderful Hiaku Donna!! & thank you for your comments on my poem also! I'm always honored. ~Trudy~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/30/2009 2:05:00 PM

What an awesome tribute to autumn, Golden Girl! "Red and gold parchment gowns" is a rich, creative description of the leaves boasting fall colors. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/30/2009 10:47:00 AM

Beautiful work Donna, best of luck in the contest...Raul