Golden Shower

Compressed air rose
In autumn air most lovely
Her mouth wide open
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 7, 2009 at 10:53 PM
This is gorgeous! (And I'm not just saying that because my name is in the title!) ;o) Hugs, Donna
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October 4, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. I really like the title. Keep on writing. Karen
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October 3, 2009 at 1:06 AM
Beautiful image here, Geoffrey. Air rose - her mouth... Love, Iolanda
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October 2, 2009 at 9:08 PM
Wow! What a picture you paint in this Haiku, Geoffrey. Thank you for sharing and thank you for you nice comment on My shape poem. Lainie
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