Golden Shovel

Golden Shovel

I do not think that I shall be,
the first or last, therefore will not
hesitate to find out what the
prize would be for coming in first.
But then I shall always stand by
my fellow writers, and those whom
we all know and always are the
ones ready to try something new.
Still, I am not sure if this is
the right time to have really tried
this style, so hesitate, for nor
am I sure how this will go? Yet
if I don’t give this a try, the
fact will remain for me at last
I should have made an effort to
combat a fear which may then lay
to rest the reliance on the
need to continue the same old
writing style, I could push aside.

Be not the first by whom the new is tried, 
Nor yet the last to lay the old aside
Alexander Pope – An Essay on Criticism
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Campanella Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Hello, Christine I like - "to rest the reliance on the need to continue the same old writing style, I could push aside" nice, loads of imagery too - Good Luck - stay safe too - Perry C.
Watts Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 3:21 PM
Hi Perry Thank you for your review and yes although this was challenging to complete this using the end words of the quote some truth did appear and made me think outside the square Cheers Christine
Watts Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Hi Perry Thank you for your review and yes although this was challenging to complete this using the end words of the quote some truth did appear and made me think outside the square Cheers Christine
Ashley Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Dear Christine, your lovely introspective musing is deep and inspiring. It takes courage to combat one's fear, the push and pull of our thoughts and heart in our poetic art, and you've expressed it so beautifully. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Watts Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 12:25 AM
I thought this challenge made me think and pleased you thought it inspiring I do usually like a metered rhymed poetry style but this caught my eye lol Cheers Christine
Ashley Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Dear Christine, I thought the quote was just an accompaniment to your beautiful poem, but after reading your reply and reading the contest rules I am even more impressed by your expressive poem. A contest challenge met with poetic finesse and soul-searching musing!
Watts Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 9:26 PM
Hi Susan Thank you and I found this a great challenge to use all words from the quote as my end words in this Poem Appreciate your review Cheers Christine
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