GOLDEN SHADES OF FALL -3rd

golden shades of fall 
like a carpet laying down 
the road to glory 
like a path to paradise 
where lovers walk hand in hand 

Autumn reverie 2 poetry contest 
3rd place 
Sponsor: JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Smith Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Don't think it possible improve on that. Well done. Regards David in NZ
Roger  Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:59 PM
Thank you very much...
Mcintosh Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you, love, Gina
Roger  Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 8:37 AM
Thank you very much...
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