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Golden Roses

Golden Roses ...to one who has faith, no explanation is necessary...to one without faith, no explanation is possible...Thomas Aquinas. Roses side by side where the grotto stood A golden garden not seen by their eyes Bernadette could see as she gathered wood Kneeling upon hearing of heaven’s cries A Lady did appear in rose bush wild A seraphic voice with no deception With a white dress and girdle gently smiled ‘I am the Immaculate Conception’ For the town of Lourdes was quick to demean Sadly scoffed as the poorest peasant girl She dug a hole and a well would canteen To make believers of the crippled churl Bernadette let your song of roses hum Upon this let processions hither come. Aug.17.2018 New Sonnets Only Only English Sonnets Are Acceptable (Fourteen lines, ten syllables per line - abab cdcd efef gg rhyming scheme.) Sponsored by: Emile Pinet Video clip from the movie"The Song of Bernadette" N/A for contest

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Date: 8/29/2018 6:37:00 AM
Beautifully crafted poem, WW. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/26/2018 5:00:00 PM
This is by all standards the heights of magnificence! WW, you continue to amaze me with your truly awesome pieces; and this retelling of Bernadette's story is a great reflection of your incredible poetic talents! This is already a winner in my books and a fave! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 8/22/2018 5:22:00 PM
Your thoughts caress the mood perfectly. So beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/17/2018 10:26:00 PM
A shining and wondrous poetic depiction of the blessed events at Lourdes. Gloriously expressed in both form and beauty, Winged Warrior. Best wishes for a win my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:27:00 PM
Excellent, WW! I can't say that this is an area that I am familiar with. But your words and the flow of them had me right from the get go...Peace n love, Charlie
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:28:00 AM
Hello WW, Your Shakespearean-formatted sonnet on "Golden Roses" from my perspective is exquisitely crafted and a true delight to read. I know the backstory quite well about Lourdes and all the events that transpired there. The You Tube clip of this classic movie only enhances your thoughts and words further. Your sonnet is an absolute FAVE in my book!! Outstanding Work!! Best Wishes, Gary
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