Golden Pond

I was raised in the sticks where you never saw a cop
It was easily a two mile walk to the school bus stop

How I got to Thrillva's house was simply by hitching
We would hurry to the pond with no intention of fishing

Both emancipated and married when we hit seventeen
What a stir we made when we opted for the city scene 

Within a few years the city life had choked us out
So we moved to Alaska in a magical walkabout

Bought a hillside cabin house and had two daughters
Cherished annual vacations in Hawaii's warm waters 

We are proud grandparents now whose lives are full
Still live in the small town what most consider dull
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 11, 2013 at 5:03 PM
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Greenlee Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 11:11 AM
great stuff!so inspiring!thanks for you kind words to my poems...much love..Kacey
K. Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 6:07 AM
I'm sorry for missing out on this earlier-- but so happy to read this now-- that hillside cabin house actually sounds divine and so refreshing :) and I bet you're wonderfully happy there :) I'm truly happy for you :) keep smiling my friend :)
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March 10, 2011 at 11:37 AM
First of all, Welcome back, Mitch. There is much to be said for the simple life in a small town. Children who grow up there seem to have good values, they appreciate the things money can't buy. Now if you and Thrillva weren't headed to the pond to go fishing, just what did you do there? (Wink!) Really enjoyed this poem and learned a bit more about you through it. Love, Caroln
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Saw your comment on Dr. Ram's poem Mitch..how have u been my friend? long time luv.. hope your life is going well and happiness follows u my friend... keep in touch now..
Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:47 AM
You have penned a very heavenly old world fast appearing nowadays. I remembered my own old days. Mitch
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