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Golden Platform

Corn silk flags the wind
Sunflowers dance the road's ditch
sun falls down the sky
leave me end of day wonder
tip like a wink over pond.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Andrea Dietrich

October 19, 2013 at 1:30 AM

this one is clever and really CUTE.

Funom Makama

June 11, 2012 at 4:56 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Hathor Ammutlinra

November 12, 2010 at 10:52 AM

the perfect poem, enjoyed the comment below, he has the right move. Take care(LIN~RA)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

November 4, 2010 at 5:22 PM

Well Done Girl This is worth the feathure of the week and more. I going to print it and frame it too :-)

Daver Austin

November 3, 2010 at 2:40 PM

This is a super piece, Sheri. Just an autumnal flash. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Barbara Gorelick

November 1, 2010 at 2:32 PM

The first line is awesome..wish I had sritten it lol..congrats on being featured. BG

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

November 1, 2010 at 1:10 PM

Contratz on your featured poem

Doris Culverhouse

November 1, 2010 at 10:30 AM

you have a featured poem this week!! Congrats!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 1, 2010 at 9:55 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Sheri. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

October 31, 2010 at 11:52 AM

Wow Sheri, such awesome images your have created in this one.. Welcome to the Soup family :)

Carolyn Devonshire

October 31, 2010 at 11:43 AM

Awesome images of fall and so creatively written, Sheri!! Wonderful work. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

October 30, 2010 at 2:35 PM

i had to read several times to grasp the greatness! Well played!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

October 30, 2010 at 12:05 PM

Thanks Carol, appreciate your welcome:) Sheri

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 30, 2010 at 12:01 PM

Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Sheri. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol