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Golden Platform

Corn silk flags the wind
Sunflowers dance the road's ditch
sun falls down the sky
leave me end of day wonder
tip like a wink over pond.

Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2013 1:30:00 AM

this one is clever and really CUTE.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 4:56:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/12/2010 10:52:00 AM

the perfect poem, enjoyed the comment below, he has the right move. Take care(LIN~RA)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 11/4/2010 5:22:00 PM

Well Done Girl This is worth the feathure of the week and more. I going to print it and frame it too :-)

Daver Austin

Date: 11/3/2010 2:40:00 PM

This is a super piece, Sheri. Just an autumnal flash. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/1/2010 2:32:00 PM

The first line is awesome..wish I had sritten it lol..congrats on being featured. BG

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 11/1/2010 1:10:00 PM

Contratz on your featured poem

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2010 10:30:00 AM

you have a featured poem this week!! Congrats!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Sheri. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/31/2010 11:52:00 AM

Wow Sheri, such awesome images your have created in this one.. Welcome to the Soup family :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2010 11:43:00 AM

Awesome images of fall and so creatively written, Sheri!! Wonderful work. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/30/2010 2:35:00 PM

i had to read several times to grasp the greatness! Well played!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/30/2010 12:05:00 PM

Thanks Carol, appreciate your welcome:) Sheri

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2010 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Sheri. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol