Heidi Sands Poet Sijo

Golden Nugget

Rain is on the way, with cool damp air and cloud cover of gray
    A large golden nugget of sunshine is held in the mind with warmth
  To endure the storm brought by weather’s sudden decision to change

Heidi Sands

7/22/18

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Arturo Michael July 25, 2018 at 10:15 AM Without that golden nugget the rain will forever fall...Nice message...All the best Heidi Heidi Sands July 25, 2018 at 10:47 AM True Arturo. We need that golden nugget :) Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner July 24, 2018 at 1:44 PM How I long for cool damp air, we are having a heat wave! Thanks for sending some blue relief my way! Heidi Sands July 24, 2018 at 2:13 PM You are welcome! I appreciate your visit :)

Mike Gentile July 24, 2018 at 8:16 AM A lovely thought, Heidi. I am holding my 'Golden Nugget" been raining here for days !!!!! Heidi Sands July 24, 2018 at 8:48 AM Great to hear you are holding onto your Golden Nugget Mike. It is continuing to rain here too! Thank you , Have a nice day :)

Lyric Man July 22, 2018 at 10:32 PM Lovely imagery.. sometimes in the middle of a storm is a beautiful, bold beam of sunshine. Reminding us that she isn't going anywhere. Really enjoyed this write! Heidi Sands July 23, 2018 at 9:03 AM Thank you Lyric Man. I appreciate your comment and I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Susan Ashley July 22, 2018 at 9:08 PM Such a great Sijo, Heidi. I enjoyed the spirit of your beautifully expressed poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Heidi Sands July 23, 2018 at 9:03 AM Thank you Susan. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Vijay Pandit July 22, 2018 at 12:36 PM Hold on to that sunshine..we got heavy rain yesterday as well. Heidi Sands July 22, 2018 at 12:44 PM I will Vijay :) You too ! Thank you.

Tom Cunningham July 22, 2018 at 11:01 AM Rain never bothers me though, used to work in it. Just grateful I could as many never get the chance. Tom Heidi Sands July 22, 2018 at 11:03 AM I understand enjoying the rain as well, Tom. It depends, sometimes it is my mood or the gray coming along lol. Thank you for your comment! :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 22, 2018 at 10:26 AM Enjoyed Heidi :) there's been so much sun and heat, I'm fully charged;) the cool grey comes with a sense of relief today for the overheated and the scorched. Heidi Sands July 22, 2018 at 10:33 AM Thank you Maureen :)

Daniel Turner July 22, 2018 at 10:06 AM I must be odd. When it's raining, seldom do I think about the sunshine. I simply enjoy the rain. However this does make a great metaphor for life. Nice write Heidi. Heidi Sands July 22, 2018 at 10:33 AM Hi DT. The rain is nice, but sometimes it helps, when it comes to the dark gray. And yes, a metaphor for life. Thank you :)

Joseph May July 22, 2018 at 9:26 AM Great Sijo Heidi..love the 2nd line.. Heidi Sands July 22, 2018 at 10:32 AM Thank you Joseph :)