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Golden Honey

Caught in a fog of elusive dreams Apparent enigma of the imagination Stirred by seductions wants Mesmerized by shadows gaze Quivering under breathless tones Set in motion with cryptic phrases Anticipating the next deadly move Realities temptations Words whispered sweetly Tongue of liquid golden honey Breaking past boundaries limitations Moistened by dreams wanton desires

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2013 6:42:00 PM

Hi Shannon, thank you for the sweet hi...it was nice having you visit my poem. I have not forgotten you. I have been in my own little world. If you like please read my poem called "A WISH." that will explain once. Sharron, please say hi when you are on line again. xox~ Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 10:10:00 PM

SHANNON,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/21/2012 12:24:00 PM

You have a descriptive gift for writting. Great visuals. Tremendous flow, too. You are very gifted.

John Rhinem

Date: 3/20/2012 7:36:00 PM

Smile ˜ 'Tongue Of Liquid Golden Honey.' ˜ Yep, Making It's Way Around World ˜ Up & Down & Round & Round With A Two-Way Ticket To Ride In Pink & Blue Just Like You & Who Is Who & Oooh Oooh Oooh ˜ Smile, Yep ˜ My Love, Always, John!:) *

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2012 4:51:00 PM

the imagery is nice

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2012 3:47:00 PM

Shannon, you are deep in this one.. i love the image of whispered words, coming from an unbelievable spot.. your poem, fills up the right motion,,, thank you for your coment..always..pd

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2012 3:46:00 PM

Long time no poem Shannon.....today you written a beautiful poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise