Golden Grass

Waving with the playful wind California's golden grass Blanketing the rolling hills Hawk's shadow passing

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/11/2011 4:18:00 AM

A nice write, Barbara. Glad it made the list.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Francine Robert's "Flowers,trees,grass or bees" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 10:51:00 AM

Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Barbara

Kash Poet

Date: 6/5/2011 8:21:00 AM

Congrats Barbara on your HM in Francine's contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2011 4:08:00 AM

how descriptive, barbara...well deserving of the award! : ) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2011 10:37:00 PM

this is really good stuff, Barbara. I believe this is just how a doditsu is to be done! congrats on the HM.

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/3/2011 9:06:00 PM

beautiful imagery Barbara, congrats on your HM in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2011 9:50:00 AM

Awesome image of the hawk's shadow moving over the grassy hills! Love this dodoitso. I'm sure this is just the type of thing the sponsor is looking for, LNC. Hope to see you high on the winners' list! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 6:31:00 AM

Wonderful write on grass with lovely images, Barbara

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/21/2011 12:00:00 AM

* “Such Serenity Rises From This Lovely Images Reflection of California's Springtimes Moments * Brushed In Wonderfully Pleasant & Bright Colours & Hues * Excellent Painting Dear Beautiful Barbara * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *

Kash Poet

Date: 5/20/2011 7:28:00 PM

Nice imagery here Barbara.Enjoyed..