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Golden Grass





Waving with the playful wind
California's golden grass
Blanketing the rolling hills
Hawk's shadow passing

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

June 11, 2011 at 4:18 AM

A nice write, Barbara. Glad it made the list.

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2011 at 12:23 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Francine Robert's "Flowers,trees,grass or bees" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 9, 2011 at 10:51 AM

Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Barbara

Kash Poet

June 5, 2011 at 8:21 AM

Congrats Barbara on your HM in Francine's contest.

Nette Onclaud

June 4, 2011 at 4:08 AM

how descriptive, barbara...well deserving of the award! : ) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

June 3, 2011 at 10:37 PM

this is really good stuff, Barbara. I believe this is just how a doditsu is to be done! congrats on the HM.

Francine Roberts

June 3, 2011 at 9:06 PM

beautiful imagery Barbara, congrats on your HM in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

May 21, 2011 at 9:50 AM

Awesome image of the hawk's shadow moving over the grassy hills! Love this dodoitso. I'm sure this is just the type of thing the sponsor is looking for, LNC. Hope to see you high on the winners' list! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 21, 2011 at 6:31 AM

Wonderful write on grass with lovely images, Barbara

Sarah Seraphin

May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM

* “Such Serenity Rises From This Lovely Images Reflection of California's Springtimes Moments * Brushed In Wonderfully Pleasant & Bright Colours & Hues * Excellent Painting Dear Beautiful Barbara * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *