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The FOOD looks so good But IT Can't fool everyone. :) I wonder if you (THE READER) even knows the Resturant Golden Corral, it's an all you can eat buffet. Looks good, but something tells me the food is filled with artificial flavoring. ;) 

   

A   AvatarThe Owner at the Golden Corral, down here In Humble Texas, reminds me of the Guy from Ghost Ship. LOL, it's an awesome movie :)

Golden Corral

(You Can't fool everyone)


1#      fooled by the sun leading the perfect crowd, one cow left behind.

2#     twisting lines, he shepherds a flock into a dark corner

3#     endless buffet in question,  his eyes spot a broken artist

For *** Contest :) Wish me Luck

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Date: 4/15/2023 9:57:00 PM
Glad I stopped eating there, sweet, enjoyed read.
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Date: 12/7/2016 7:14:00 PM
Hello Poet Destroyer, I have eaten at The Golden Corral, they have a good buffet. I am having a problem posting a poem on Submit section.I am trying to write a poem titled Mr. Sandman's Magic, I have tried 4 times and it did not go through. I am wondering why I'm having a problem. Can you tellme?
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/7/2016 8:01:00 PM
I tried for the fifth time and I got through. Thank you anyway.
Date: 11/18/2016 2:42:00 PM
I liked the Golden Corral as well good food there.I like this poem.
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Date: 8/17/2016 9:12:00 AM
i love golden corral!!!!!!!!!!!!! and thank you for the welcoming i appreciate it! and i never seen anyone do a poem about golden corral before keep it uP!!!
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Date: 8/14/2016 4:01:00 AM
Hi Linda, nicely written. The movie you mentioned (ghost ship) is quite creepy but engaging too. I like scary movies with good substance.
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Date: 7/2/2016 12:58:00 AM
Awesome poem. I've ate at the Golden Corral, and many other all you can eat buffets over the years. starting with Ponderosa. But this much is true, Golden Corral makes me sick, no matter how much or little I eat.. to much sodium, something just isn't right and yeah.... My kids beg to go there because of all the food, it's just not healthy.. your poem is great, and I'm not fooled by the display to attract the hungry.
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Date: 5/21/2016 6:24:00 PM
What was XXX contest?
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Date: 5/21/2016 6:23:00 PM
haha. Oh PD, Golden Corral, huh? I wanted to say hi, and I chose a great poem to come visit. I actually love this place in Utah!! But I never go there. Too much temptation. I can't control myself around all the food.
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Date: 4/26/2016 10:25:00 AM
You paint beautifully...hope to see your beauty someday
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Date: 4/12/2016 5:17:00 PM
Hi Linda, excellent write as usual, 3 Monoku. Each is excellent in its own way. Into the darkness we go on a song of tomorrow. You can't fool everyone, i think my trouble could be i can't fool anyone, but why should i wish too. The picture of the food just makes me hungry Linda. True though, from a picture you never know what you are going to get. Well the writes are excellent. A seven rating for this piece and into my faves. A new dawn. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:24:00 PM
Love it! Have you seen Supernatural? This makes me think of the Leviathans plan for humanity.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/11/2016 6:53:00 AM
I had the guy from Ghost Ship on here... but took it down. Ha
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/11/2016 6:52:00 AM
Lol...yes... fits, Leviathans persona perfectly. ;)
Date: 4/3/2016 4:10:00 AM
Amazing poem! :) Come see my Alzheimer's series if you want!! :) I am not forcing you to do so, but it's a brand new one I just typed up today. Wishing you a great, awesome day! Will be commenting on more of your work tonight!
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Date: 3/31/2016 1:29:00 PM
1# That must be the one he cooked. 2# Hard to spot horse meat from that dark corner. 3#Oh my God, soilent green! Damned if I can decipher your short hand, but I tried. HOw'd I do? Love, daver
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Daver Austin
Date: 3/31/2016 1:30:00 PM
Oh, and luck in the contest. Old daver
Date: 3/28/2016 9:18:00 PM
Great Monoku, well expressed.
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Date: 3/27/2016 12:28:00 PM
Great one liners Linda :-)
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:24:00 AM
These should need no luck P.D. All are great but my fave is #1. ; )
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Date: 3/20/2016 8:15:00 AM
You don't need luck when you have talent like this. You are a poet through and through. Elaine
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Date: 3/12/2016 3:45:00 PM
I have visited this trough a couple times up in PA. It was ok, but I like your poem better.
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:47:00 AM
Liked the line "his eyes spot a broken artist"! I hope you are well and are having a good day. Do you follow baseball at all? I have written a poem or two about the sport. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/5/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thank you PD for your always welcome comments on my endeavours.rgds Brian
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:04:00 AM
Hello my dearest sis! I'm stopping by to enjoy again these amazing monoku of yours. I Love them and the message. Thank you so much again for sharing and again, thanks a lot for appreciating my gift last valentine day(monoku). Btw, i wrote 3 lines last night for your contest but I wasn't able to enter right away coz of internet problem. I subscribed a new one this evening but your contest had already filled up-so fast. I'm sad dearest sis. I'll just post soon, anyway. Hugs! <3lots,4evrSis-BFF GL
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:46:00 PM
haha... I love your Monoku!!!! :)
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Date: 2/8/2016 6:11:00 PM
Wow, very original, read many times.... Thanks for sharing Linda! Keith;-)
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Date: 2/8/2016 4:20:00 PM
This read ever so well as a complete poem, with 'One Cow left behind' the last line interesting which ever way one reads it.
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Date: 2/8/2016 4:35:00 AM
You are also very brave to be the one pointing this out. You have to know someone is going to spill the beans. Ideas are never secure, but they can be right on target. So the question for the owner is, "Do you love food, or do you just love what the crowd brings you ($)?" I hope it is the former. It takes a lot of tender loving care to make a meal that is deliciouso and good for people. I don't know the place. There's only four in NY, and I have never been to one. Probably bad!!!
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