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Golden Blue Dreams

Indigo deepens
loveliness seasons convey
around golden bliss
sunbeams excel streaming down
upon landscape sceneries


rewritten
3-6-11
written for
Sponsor ^Rick Parise 
Contest Name Blue and Gold

happinessnatureplacesseasonstanka

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James Fraser

April 12, 2011 at 11:32 AM

Many congratulation's Cecil on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

March 23, 2011 at 8:46 PM

Great to see your poem honored HM. Cecil, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored success. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

March 23, 2011 at 9:01 AM

I knew this would be in the winners' circle, Cecil. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

March 23, 2011 at 6:40 AM

Wonderful write here Cecil.Congrats on your win---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2011 at 10:32 PM

HI, Cecil. Congrats on the HM. THere were so many beauties in this contest. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

March 22, 2011 at 4:35 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Cecil

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2011 at 3:43 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Congratulation on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 22, 2011 at 12:38 PM

Congrats Cecil on your HM in the blue and gold contest my friend.. awesome words depicting the colors so well.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..

Audrey Haick

March 22, 2011 at 10:39 AM

Beautiful Tanka! Congratulations on your HM Win in Rick's "Blue and Gold" Contest, Cecil. Annalise

Debbie Guzzi

March 6, 2011 at 6:07 PM

better, better, think a wee bit more words like excel & convey are free verse type words and have no emotion or sensation to draw the reader in to YOUR moment so it becomes their moment too! PROGRESS {I haven't writen one yet LOL} HUGS

Debbie Guzzi

March 6, 2011 at 10:07 AM

Hi cecil! you know with 31 or less syllables it seems using "that" 3 times is not serving you well hon, take a few more minutes and use those 3 syllables to get your emotional "hook" in the verse , want YOu to win! Light & Love [if you get a min can you give me a blog comment?]