Golden

golden morning sun dances upon chilly lake.. red maples undress
Inspired by Skat's contest pictures
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 3:42 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on a most beautiful win! Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 4:42 AM
Superb haiku Sara! No wonder its a first place winner.. Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 4:49 PM
wow, this is gorgeous, Sara. BIG congrats on number one spot!
Kimathi Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Hi Sara. Congrats for your #1 placement! ;-)
Ebbs Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 8:18 PM
Congrats Sara!
Mohn Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Congrats on the #1 Sara...lovely scene you capture
Goss Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Very nice poem.
Lane Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 8:46 AM
You've set quite a beautiful scene, Sara. Congratulations!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Sara deserving on the top podium congrats!!!~Olive Eloisa
Haight Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:07 AM
Hi Sara, love your beautiful Haiku. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 5:26 AM
Congrats on top win dear friend!!!..
A  Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Sara, a true golden haiku. The imagery was the best of the best. Congratulations on your number one win. LOVE SKAT
Roper Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 12:51 AM
wonderful Haiku, Sara, congratulations on your win!
Sirak Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 6:32 AM
Great images! Love the contradiction of the air getting chillier yet the maple trees undress anyway.
Aniagyei Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Gold, blue, red..... Beauty picture painted You are mentioned in my latest poem, Sara "On PoetrySoup" take time to check in
Fleming Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Yes, I agree...It is rather lovely! Best regards, Sara. :) john
Kendrick Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Your comments are uplifting..Sara
Gill Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Lovely :))
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