Gold Plated

young feathers plated in 14 karat " black gold" fowl riches destroyed

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Elaine George

Date: 6/6/2010 8:23:00 AM

So profound ! Congrtulations on your win, Abe. Sensational Haiku. Laini

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 8:17:00 PM

Another great win, Abe! congratulations. LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Abe. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 5/16/2010 6:14:00 AM

Abe, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/15/2010 5:03:00 AM

Cöngratulations Dearest Abe,a great poet indeed. .Charma

John Freeman

Date: 5/14/2010 8:40:00 PM

Congratulations Abe on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Rick Parise

Date: 5/14/2010 5:38:00 PM

Nice win Abe ~~~~Congrats!!~Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2010 1:08:00 PM

Congrats Abe on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this awesome write and title ... enjoy another top ten win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Date: 5/14/2010 12:38:00 PM

The message is carried in a vivid way in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/14/2010 12:12:00 AM

Abe, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/13/2010 4:33:00 PM

Abe- great underlying message in this haiku - well done - God Bless, mj

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 12:57:00 PM

Well this is a very interesting haiku, love the last line, of course,..p.d.