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Gold Plated

young feathers plated 
in 14 karat " black gold" 
fowl riches destroyed

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2010

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June 6, 2010 at 8:23 AM

So profound ! Congrtulations on your win, Abe. Sensational Haiku. Laini

Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2010 at 8:17 PM

Another great win, Abe! congratulations. LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 12:20 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Abe. Love, Carol

May 16, 2010 at 6:14 AM

Abe, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Charmaine Chircop

May 15, 2010 at 5:03 AM

Cöngratulations Dearest Abe,a great poet indeed. .Charma

May 14, 2010 at 8:40 PM

Congratulations Abe on your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2010 at 1:08 PM

Congrats Abe on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this awesome write and title ... enjoy another top ten win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

May 14, 2010 at 12:38 PM

The message is carried in a vivid way in this poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

May 14, 2010 at 12:12 AM

Abe, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul

May 13, 2010 at 4:33 PM

Abe- great underlying message in this haiku - well done - God Bless, mj

Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2010 at 12:57 PM

Well this is a very interesting haiku, love the last line, of course,..p.d.

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