Gold

No ripple of breeze could be half as gentle than those tiny feet, as they lightly tread through the open meadow of poppies blooming while morning sunlight lay gold on her head
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:21 PM
Wonderful imagery. another well deserved win for you that I am seeing now.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:51 PM
congrats Carrie on a superb first place win .. wow..
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 9:49 PM
Congrats on this beauty, Carrie! One of my favorites I've read today. Blessings, Rhonda
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Carrie, very nice work. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe
Goller Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Short and Sweet indeed, Congratulation on your 1st place win..God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Brown Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your super 1st place win in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Reed Avatar
February 14, 2012 at 7:44 PM
Nice carrie long time no hear... best wishes to you... JackReed3...
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