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No ripple of breeze could be half as gentle than those tiny feet, as they lightly tread through the open meadow of poppies blooming while morning sunlight lay gold on her head

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/18/2012 9:21:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. another well deserved win for you that I am seeing now.
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Date: 2/16/2012 9:51:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a superb first place win .. wow..
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Date: 2/16/2012 2:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2012 9:49:00 PM
Congrats on this beauty, Carrie! One of my favorites I've read today. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2012 3:44:00 PM
Carrie, very nice work. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:24:00 PM
Short and Sweet indeed, Congratulation on your 1st place win..God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/15/2012 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your super 1st place win in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2012 7:44:00 PM
Nice carrie long time no hear... best wishes to you... JackReed3...
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