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Going Out-Of-It (Triple Haiku)

GOING OUT-OF-IT (triple Haiku) going out-of-it where time looks back at you eyes open but shut all life is stagnate not a rustle in the trees going out-of-it yet you are aware going out-of-it half-way life is eternal

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Date: 5/9/2010 7:28:00 PM
Daver, I always enjoy your sense of freedom in your writes!....one of your fans! jamesy
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Date: 4/25/2010 5:04:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, thanks for your comments. You got what I was trying to do.
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Date: 4/25/2010 10:18:00 AM
you are so right , life expands to 2. enjoyed,..p.d
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:27:00 AM
very nice loved it hope you are enjoying your weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:31:00 AM
Good morning love the write enjoyed. Have your self a wonderful Sunday,,Irma
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:23:00 AM
Please don't go out of it unless you are having an out-of-body experience, Daver. Then I would envy you! Great poem, my spooky friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:43:00 PM
wow, I like how you finished this one up, enlightened, eh??
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Date: 4/24/2010 4:54:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. I really like the uplifting ending. I like the way you presented the pauses. Keep on writing!! Hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:13:00 PM
A triple beauty too Daver and such lovely words of Haik .. life is eternal and very cherished ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/24/2010 2:13:00 PM
Great thoughts put to pen in this one...Keep the great writes flowing.. Have you read my write "Writing Me Softly With His Rhyme" ?Sara
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