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Sometimes the best way out of a bad situation is through the door. Sometimes it isn't easy to leave....God bless the battered and broken and cause the darkness to come to light. May strength rescue the weak and may the angels have their backs! 

Nearing four A.M. and closing time...
He says,"one more with double lime" 
Meanwhile... brown eyes in the mirror gaze
She takes off his ring...puts on her face

Where makeup flows...more is required
Those telltale signs...sure cover hard!
Damn all those years...with pain condoned
She'll scream no more..She's got her going on

She's got her going on...in her silk Deville
Love pointed south...dressed fit to kill
Her cheeks are dry...her heart's a stone...
'Hell with goodbye..she's got her going on!

He runs to beg...It's past too late
Her burning tires.....Accentuate !
His staggered stare...meets the ice cold dawn
She's outta there...Got her going on!

Mid morning knock..at the front door
He smiles, "She's coming... back for more"!
Handcuffed.... in route...to his hoosegow home
He ain't getting out....  She's got her going on!!

She's got her going on...In her silk Deville.....
Love pointed south...dressed fit to kill
Her cheeks are dry...her heart's a stone
'Hell with goodbye...She's got her going on!


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Date: 12/5/2017 4:58:00 PM
Powerful, beautifully expressed lyrics in your awesome song Chuck. So many great lines in your write but 'Her cheeks are dry...her heart's a stone' - that gets to the heart of the matter so amazingly that she's done and she's not going to take it anymore. Excellent and sounds like a country hit to me!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 12/6/2017 12:43:00 AM
Thank you Susan! I appreciate your comment and your pen!
Date: 11/3/2017 8:35:00 AM
A powerful song that shows heart's determination to withstand the trials of life excellently done dear, Chuck!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/3/2017 8:38:00 AM
My sincere thanks, Demetrios.
Date: 11/2/2017 9:42:00 PM
Wow! A terrific C&W hit. Great work Chuck...
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/3/2017 8:39:00 AM
A heartfelt, thank you Charlie.
Date: 11/2/2017 3:18:00 AM
An interesting song this Chuck, sounds like ' she's got her going on.' I really like it...Maria
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/3/2017 6:44:00 PM
My Maria! I love that song! I also love your comment!
Date: 11/1/2017 2:10:00 PM
Love the use of words and how you wrote this lyric... A very good song..
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/3/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Silent! I appreciate those kind words!
Date: 11/1/2017 9:01:00 AM
Chuck you are so talented writer--love the song you wrote--if someone can record it, it will be a hit!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 11/3/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! Your words are so appreciated!
Date: 10/28/2017 1:35:00 AM
wow, this is like a country song :) "Her cheeks are dry...her heart's a stone 'Hell with goodbye...She's got her going on!" Love it!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/28/2017 10:16:00 AM
WoW!!! Becca, where have u bin hiding! So good 2 hear your voice! Thanks for your kind words. I like the country idea. Now to write a melody! Guitar N Harmonica time!
Date: 10/23/2017 5:00:00 PM
I just loved this lyrical piece Chuck! Thank you for putting a big smile on my face! I am faving this little gem! ; )
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/23/2017 5:28:00 PM
Connie, your comment made my day! Thanks very much! Chuck
Date: 10/21/2017 4:35:00 PM
Really interesting read love this. different, yet so worldly
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/23/2017 5:21:00 PM
Harry, many thanks for your kind words, So appreciated !! Chuck
Date: 10/20/2017 7:34:00 PM
wowowow, I LOVE this. Ahhhh, what sweet revenge. I was not expecting that!! What a great story it told!!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/23/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I so appreciate your comment AND your poetry! My best to you, chuck
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