Going Home Ii

Twenty minutes from home----
     We are returning home from space,
     A part of God's creation: a beautiful and awesome place!
     It's been a great flight for me and six others.
     Much was accomplished by my astronaut sisters and brothers.

Nineteen minutes from home----
     Flip the switches; watch the dials;
     Anticipate our loved ones smiles!
     I guess by now, we can easily be seen.
     These shuttle runs have become so routine.

Eighteen minutes from home----
     I'll be in church tomorrow,with my kids and my wife;
     Then I'll begin to resume my earth-bound life
     The computers have us right on course, 
     And we are beginning to feel the gravitational force!

Seventeen minutes from home----
     A lobster for dinner (maybe I'll devour it whole)
     Everything's fine because I know God is in control.
     It will be nice to set foot on earth once again,
     And be joyously welcomed by our families and friends.

Sixteen minutes from home----
     Something's wrong! Thank You Lord that You said You would never leave me alone.
     Oh God!
     I'm Home!


           Originally written by me  Feb 3,2003 after the Shuttle disaster upon re-entry

                                                                             Charlie Pelota  HSLP

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/13/2009 6:46:00 PM
Genuinely Talented Poet... Welcome To PoetrySoup... (Just like they Welcomed Me)... Isn't It Delicious... And This Poem is difinitely Meat and Potatoes... Loved It... MoonBee
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Date: 9/4/2009 10:45:00 AM
a powerful poem, and welcome to poetry soup thanks for your kin comments on my poetry and I look forward in reading more of your work God bless you
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:15:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Charlie. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and best wishes on your continued writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2009 5:11:00 PM
this poem is an awesome poem, done with grace and form. For all, God bless and keep up Faith, Robert A. Ball
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