Going Home

“Going Home”

(for all the rescue pets just waiting…)



Just when I thought how wonderful it would be in my life - 
To not be responsible for someone else, 
I met you.

You weren’t that attractive, 
A little dirty, perhaps,
A smell that indicated a bath was badly needed,
A little shy - refusing to look at me,
You sat huddled in the far reaches of that cage,
Afraid,
Untrusting,
Broken,
Void of all hope
Of ever loving someone again.

I walked on -
Looking at all those eager faces
Striving to show me
How playful they were,
How willing to follow me home.

But I went back -
To you
Where you still huddled
In your little corner of hopelessness.

I sat down…
And waited.
I asked:  “Have you given up?”
And you looked up at me
With those lifeless eyes
That told me you had…

I waited, sitting,
Poking a few treats thru your cage.
Cautiously, you inched toward me
And took the treats with gratitude
While I stroked your forehead.

You extended your paw
And I took it in my hand
And felt Life’s warmth within you.

We bonded.

I asked: 
 “Would you like to go home with me
And stay forever?”

You smiled …
And for one brief second
I saw a glimmer of light
Still shining in your eyes.

“Open the cage,”
I called out.

…….“This girl is going Home!”





Jb pearce
02/20/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/20/2020 6:55:00 PM
Such a great write Jan... reminds me of when we got Alpen from Battersea dogs home for my son George.. George was just 1yo and him and Alpen just totally bonded. Not sure I ever knew Alpen's background... but it was so rewarding to have him in our family.. best wishes. DAMO x
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