Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

*g.Oing H.Aiku* (-: *c.Razy* :-)

** G.H.C.** by: P.D.

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(* BROKEN *)

Steping on dried leaves
The earthquake under my feet
7 years bad luck~~
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(* ANGRY *)

Breathing out steam
I hate all your excuses
Gurrrrr!~~
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(* TWILIGHT *)

With a moonlight kiss
One night and it's all over
Happy hunting days~~
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(* BLOOD LUST *)

I need your fang-s
Bite real deep into my soul
My blood is all yours~~
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(* WAITING *)

Insomnia has me
Keep me by your finger tip
I am still awake~~
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(* LIFELESS *)

Your my addiction 
Hypnotize like a zombie
Feeding off your brain~~
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(* HUNGRY *)

Feeding the wolf-ffff
Bloody leaves under body
Nature takes it's course~~
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(* SWEET & SOUR *)

Wetter than a dream
Drowning the moon in the sea
I am all you see~~
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(* TOGETHER *)

Across the mountain
Never a last fantasy
Soon you will be mine~~
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 (* CRUSHED *)

Broken night whisper
Tears upon the cotton bed
Silk like the storm cloud~~
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(* MY EVERYTHING *)

You are my sunlight
Eclipse covering my pain
Moon and stars above~~
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(* LAST CHANCE *)

It's now or never
I need you more than roses
Kissing does not help~~
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;-)  to my love  (-:
     Nathan Dilts
;-)  from  P.D.  (-:

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:26 PM awe so cute, wehn you in love **SKAT**

Jack Horne August 16, 2012 at 1:27 PM lol, enjoyed reading these again, my friend

Jack Horne July 2, 2012 at 9:29 AM lovely haiku : ) hope you have a great week, PD

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 1, 2010 at 11:02 PM hi there pd :) I did say I would be away I think it lasted for a total of one day-- just needed to bounce back--typical me now I seem to be back?? who knows, I just might be able to go haiku crazzzy and make it to your contest-- tick tock tick tock for me --crammer mode now --and that guy on my pic--hmm don't you think he looks like me?? having an identity crisis here... enjoy your day now see you later

Jayne Eggins September 28, 2010 at 5:27 AM Its all been said much better than I ... brava and congrates on the wonderful poetry love Jayne x x

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen September 27, 2010 at 12:28 PM Cool and crazy!!! Great series of random haiku thoughts! A great example for your contest. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2010 at 6:00 PM Trying to get an idea from this, how you want your contest approached. This is not helping me. This is very random stuff. haha. and I like some kind of common theme. But I am guessing you WANT it all crazy mixed up? May the best crazy win!! LUv, Andrea ps. hope you won't think I am trying to copy ya. I have been planning my contest for a while now and it's on haiku too. But not like yours at all! I really love haiku.

James Fraser September 26, 2010 at 3:57 AM Haiku crazy it is, and every one a gem. Happy Sunday to you p.d. >> James :)

Vicki Acquah September 25, 2010 at 3:15 PM I went Haiku crazy today 2 ,only mine I wrote in the 60ties.... beepob dooowoopo! I cant believe we both have Insomnia ha ha you r good. thanks for reading my work . I am new here , and I will read more of yours later ...

Kimberly Larocca September 25, 2010 at 2:00 PM Wow, this is amazing. I haven't written any Haiku's yet but you are truly inspiring.

Daver Austin September 19, 2010 at 9:33 AM This is one of your elements. I like these mucho, like for instance, "Sweet and sour" - You have a refreshing style and vivid imagination. Don't ever lose them. Dave. P.S.don't capitalize in Haiku. But then, in your case, I think you might come off great no matter what you do. Love, Dave

Matthew Anish September 18, 2010 at 6:59 AM Fine haiku - and you stuck to the 5-7-5 format. Good show! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2010 at 7:47 PM Congrats on having two poems at the top of the HOT POEMS list as of tonight... this is awesome and so meaningful... hope u agree my P.D. BBF... how is Nate feeling from all the hoopla one more time? POETRY... this is the key reason we are all here.. yet poets like to pick on all of us ... wonder why that is ... Nate is a good poet... hope all this stuff gets straightened out ...one more time... omg...the drama.. my wedding had drama but this is even over the top more..luv.. your BBF...

David Smalling September 16, 2010 at 7:09 AM Great blast of imagination here "crushed" and "sweet and sour' makes me delirus ... Nathan better know what he deserves ... a poet without exception.

Lynette Chachere September 15, 2010 at 3:19 PM lovely warp of haikus. i bet it bites real deep into those twilight lovers! and real sweet at the end. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Kim Hilliker September 15, 2010 at 1:00 PM A great collection!

Anna-Marie Docherty September 15, 2010 at 10:52 AM An interesting collection of picture perfect imagery within these little haikus and then some! You sure got down to nature and all its business for these! Nice! Thanks for your welcome comments as ever, Anna-marie.

Katherine Stella September 14, 2010 at 5:54 PM holy haiky madness my friend great imagery within each and like others said hopes it's fictional lol also can see this in a magazine also thanks for all your kind comments on my stuff I will return soon to hit ya up again me behind yikes keep on forging ahead hu raaaaaa

Kristi Hayner September 13, 2010 at 1:06 PM Very cool Haiku! Hope that this is all fiction and you are not really hurting this much........

Caryl Muzzey September 13, 2010 at 7:47 AM Wonderful Haikus, enjoyed the read. Caryl

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2010 at 11:08 PM P.D. I really love reading haiku of any type. And I very much enjoyed these poems. I had some real favorites here, especially the romantic ones. Cute tribute at the end. I am a big fan of True Blood, so I really liked Blood Lust! My suggestion. Since you do not post a whole lot of new poems daily, you should divide up these kinds so you maybe only do three at a time. I have at least 200 footles but I've only shown half of them so far by doing them in small groups! Just a suggestion! LUv, Andrea

Ravindra K Kapoor September 12, 2010 at 7:36 PM What a wealth of Haiku you have spread here like gems my friend. All most all of them are embedded with the creative power of your writing skill. Great treasure which I think you should have posted one by one as many of them are quite serious and thought provoking. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Poet D.

Thvia Shetley September 12, 2010 at 2:33 PM an amazing collection!

Phyllis Babcock September 12, 2010 at 9:59 AM Enjoyed reading all these Haiku's today. Have a great day. God Bless Phyl

Doris Culverhouse September 12, 2010 at 7:17 AM enjoyed reading today! Well played! me and my hunny had a spat last night.

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