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Going Down

There once was a fantastical player who licked his way through every layer he thought curls a pain but it was quite plain he'd stay down cause he wanted to lay her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/6/2014 11:17:00 PM
Am too smilin'
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Date: 7/5/2014 1:44:00 AM
I had to read twice for the wording of line three.Now I think I got it. Good one, Debs!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/7/2014 7:53:00 AM
yup nuance & innuendo euphemisms [poetic tropes!]
Date: 7/4/2014 6:24:00 PM
Hmm..that's something quite interesting!
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:16:00 PM
Interesting Limerick..Not sure if a girl or woman was on the team or if you are meaning something else..Thanks for stopping by..Rebecca is what most commonly call Black-Eyed Susans or a plant somewhat like a dwarf Sunflower but not really for the flower is a single layer of petals and the center is not as large or exaggerated..Thanks again..Oh, you can just type in pictures Rebecca plants or flowers and see what they look like..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2014 2:47:00 AM
Ooh that's a bit saucy. Another fun cheeky read.
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:31:00 PM
I'm going to allow my brain to absorb this, then move on
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Date: 6/24/2014 7:18:00 PM
wow! what! Okay,,, LOL... Linda
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