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Gogyoka Winter

Snow lays deep
showing indentations of bird’s feet.
      From whence they come
        Where doest  they go.
         Which way is home.











written 25/10/2012

seasonslight verse

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Poet Destroyer A

November 10, 2012 at 6:00 PM

Seren, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2012 at 5:45 PM

Ahh!!I like the description of nature..Enjoyed ..Congrats on your win..Sara

Seren Roberts

November 9, 2012 at 6:12 PM

Thank you Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 9, 2012 at 2:23 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Seren , looking forward to your blog lol xx

Seren Roberts

November 9, 2012 at 6:12 PM

Thanks Mandy.

Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2012 at 11:32 PM

Inventive poem and I love the title you used! congrats in the contest.

Seren Roberts

November 9, 2012 at 6:12 PM

Many thanks Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 8, 2012 at 11:11 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Seren. Love, Carol

Seren Roberts

November 9, 2012 at 6:11 PM

Thank you Carol

Tahera Mannan

November 7, 2012 at 9:57 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Seren.

Seren Roberts

November 9, 2012 at 6:10 PM

Many Thanks

Joann Grisetti

November 7, 2012 at 5:35 PM

congratulations!

Seren Roberts

November 7, 2012 at 5:48 PM

nk you so much, haven't attempted writing like this before.

Debbie Guzzi

October 25, 2012 at 5:47 PM

awww' Spring is sprung the grass is riz I wonder where the birdies is? They say the bird is on the wing, ain't that absurd, I thought the wing was on the bird' was a fav of mine when little! Light & Love.