Gogyohka 3

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Sun's out In patches Dries rain's moisture Quietly housewife got the lease Dancing dog

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2022 7:09:00 AM

They can get quite happy when they see their going out! Fun poem to read, my friend. Have a joyful week, Sara! Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2022 1:30:00 AM

Great imagery. Let the dog dance.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2022 4:00:00 AM

Victor, I have it fixed where she can go out the doggie door but she likes more space than is fenced in. LOL..She wants the whole world. LOL..Thanks for the visits. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/13/2022 11:26:00 AM

Sweet poem. Well done :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2022 11:41:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2022 9:42:00 AM

Great verse with great description imagery, and feelings. . Blessing my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2022 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for the blessing. I need all I can get. I appreciate the visit. Sara