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Sheets of clouds Unaffected By gusts of wind Nice steady rain To end the drought Written: November 13, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 11/15/2022 5:28:00 AM

This is a new form of poetry that looks so fine. A heavy rain is a blessing in the time of drought ! Enjoy it Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2022 7:17:00 AM

Valsa, Thanks for the compliments. We were dry and God has sent us some rain twice now. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/14/2022 12:40:00 PM

Yes, sometimes rain is a true blessing. Nicely said, Sara. Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2022 7:14:00 AM

Janice, It started raining sometimes during the night and it is misty and maybe some sprinkles out there now which is a good thing for us at this point. We had gotten behind with moisture. Thanks for dropping by and for taking time to comment. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2022 7:06:00 AM

I like this form of poetry, Sara. Thanks for sharing it with us. Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2022 6:29:00 AM

I hope that you will try some and see how it goes with you. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2022 1:32:00 AM

At the moment I hear thunder and rain. But in Malta, it won't last long.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2022 4:01:00 AM

Victor, Is the short rain storms enough moisture for the island to stay green? Thanks for the visit to my pages. Sara